Lo. To write my own version of a myth.

Caitlin McGuffie 28.1.08

From inside the palace

Before the world was as it is now strange creatures wandered the Earth. My tale takes place in Ancient Egypt. Rose was a tall beautiful young lady with shiny brown hair both her and her sister Daisy were the Goddesses of Water and Scents. They lived with their father an excellent scientist they also lived in a dry desert but with clean water and amazing scenery. One afternoon whilst the sisters were walking Daisy was lifted off her feet by the horrible three eyed Monkbubat. Rose stood startled at the sight. Rose wandered home still emensly shocked.

When Rose arrived home she sped to find her father and inform him of Daisy’s kidnapping. After her father had been informed he took Rose around the amazingly huge desert in search of Daisy. Meanwhile at the three eyed Monkbubat`s secret hideout Daisy struggled to free herself from the beasts evil clutches. Then Rose and her father came to a deserted and bare town, the houses were scattered bricks and the oasis was nothing more than a tiny whole in between two heaps of bricks. As they glanced around they came to a colossal palace with a coat of shimmering paint, it glistened in the scorching sun.

As they stared they seemed to walk closer and closer then they stopped at the entrance to the palace and carefully peered inside to see extremely expensive riches. Rose and her father sat down and Rose said “Father to find Daisy all we have to do is find the Monkbubat and his disgusting smell!” Her fathers face turned from a dull frown to a overjoyed smile and then rushed around sniffing the whole time. “Rose I knew you were intelligent but that is the cleverest thing you have ever said.” Squealed her father in emense excitement.

Moments later they both smelt the most horrible smell of bull-monkey seeping through the palace. Rose rushed inside the palace and said that she had found Daisy and her whereabouts. Just then they came face to face with the Monkbubat. Rose thrust off her sandals and grabbed the beast by it’s wiry but skinny bat wings, then with amazing strength Rose circled herself around still holding the Monkbubat, she threw it towards the solid ground. Suddenly the beast split into a bull, bat, monkey and three eyed monster squealing in pain. Rose, Daisy and their father sprinted home knowing Daisy was safe again.