List of changes made in the original manuscript as commented by the reviewer –
Comments on old manuscript / Change made in new manuscript- Page 1-line 42-49
- Page 2- line 43
- Page 3- Line 19-27
- - Page 5. Table I
- Page 6. Table II
- Table III
- Table IV
- Page 8 line 19-22
- Discussion is too long. Needs to be more crisp and precise.
- Merging of paragraph
- Page 11, Line 13 – 14 changed as
- Page 11, Line 15 – 19
- Page 11 paragraph
- Line 23 -28 page 11 & 12
- Paragraph 1 page 12
- Line 10 – 11 page 12
- Page 12 paragraph 3
- Page 13, paragraph 2
- Page 14 paragraph 1
- Page 14 paragraph 2
- Page 15, line 4
Spelling corrected
Results and sentence reframe – page 3 lines 12 – 15
None of the neonates in the control group has thrombocytopenia.
Table deleted of less important as for as study concerned
Become table II and attached as a separate sheet on page 16, changes made in the table are –
- A separate column is added on the right for controle for thrombocytopenia and no thrombocytopenia and blood culture.
- Details of figures in parenthesis is explained at the bottom of the table.
- A column is added on the right describing - Platelet count range in cases of thrombocytopenia(µl) – to explain the severity of the thrombocytopenia
Addition a column in table III to explain the severity of thrombocytopenia.
Changes made in the discussion –
- Paragraph 1 and 2 merged (page 8)
- Page 8, line 9 – 10 - “Neonatal septicemia requires rapid, accurate diagnosis and treatment for better prognosis”
- Page 8, line 10 – 12 - Sentence reframed as “Thrombocytopenia occurs in early course of septicemia, therefore platelet count may be consider as early predictor for the diagnosis of septicemia [20,21].
- Reference number 4 omitted
- Line 13 -21 – paragraph reframed and merged with paragraph 1 on page 8
- Omitted along with reference number 23, reference 24 is now 23
- Page 8, paragraph 2 – reframed and reference number 10 omitted
- Shifted to page 10
- Merged to paragraph 2 page 8
- Omitted,
- Reference 34 become reference 22
- Merges with paragraph 2 page 8
- Omitted, reference 35 & 36 also omitted
- Reference 37 become 33