Thesis Statement = Artificial intelligence will not threat to the survival of mankind.

Artificial intelligence can make our life better. 'Artificial intelligence (AI) is the intelligence exhibited by machines or software. It is also the name of the academic field which studies how to create computers and computer software that are capable of intelligent behavior. Major AI researchers and textbooks define this field as "the study and design of intelligent agents", in which an intelligent agent is a system that perceives its environment and takes actions that maximize its chance of success.'  In short word, it is a computer which can think and do things like human, maybe more efficient than human. People dream about it for a long time, now, we are lucky enough to witness AlphaGo appears, it can learn human Go chess players' chess manuals, when you play with it, it will search on the Internet and run many computers to help calculate, it will assume hundreds of different situations and get the best solution and then make one move, we can say, you are playing with thousands of people on the same time, if you make any mistake, you may have no chance to correct it again. Yes, Artificial intelligence is such powerful. So, just assume what can it do for you in your life. If you feel cold, it will open heater to you, it knows you will take a shower after coming back to home, it will boil the water and wait for you back, it can help you manage your finances, or feed your pets when you are not at home. It just like a people who take care of your studying, working, and living. The aim to develop Artificial intelligence is not build another kind of human, use metal bodies, why people need it is using to help people deal with many things that are really hard, it can use many resources people cannot use, also, when people want to relax, it can keep working. All technology is aim to make people live more comfortable, Artificial intelligence is no exception.

1. Examine the Thesis Statement.

a) It contains a grammar error, or a vocabulary error, or both.

2. Examine the topic sentence.

3. Locate the conclusion sentence.

a) Do the topic sentence and the conclusion sentence match?

4. Immediately following the topic sentence is a quote.

a) Does the author introduce the quote? Yes or no?

b) Does the quote help the paragraph? Why or why not?

c) Is it effective to place the quote immediately after the topic sentence? Why or why not?

d) Does the quote explain the previous sentence (the topic sentence)?

e) What do you think about the length of the quote?

5. Read the rest of the paragraph.

a) Do you notice any grammar problems?

6. You have finished checking the paragraph for grammar. Now look at the topic sentence again. Do you think this topic sentence is effective for this paragraph's content? Why or why not?