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Teachers’ Guide for Mid-Term Assessments
for
The Third “Ideal” KISS Grammar Book
The students’ book includes a copy of the directions, the sample test, and the texts from which the sentences have been taken or adapted. You may want the students to read and discus the relevant study before taking the test, especially to be sure that the students know what the words mean—we don’t want vocabulary problems interfere with a test of a their understanding of sentence structure.
The directions and the sample test are in both books because you may want to try the sample yourself, and because they are the same no matter which of the tests you choose to use. [You can let the students use the one in their book, or you can print out a copy from this one.]
I have included three tests for two reasons. First, teachers may want to use different tests in different years. Second, some tests are a little more difficult than others, so you can choose. (Of course, you can use more than one.)
Three Important Things to Note
First, as I hope I noted in the “Introduction” to this Third Book, to my knowledge no third graders have ever been asked to learn how to distinguish finite verbs from verbals. But if students are going to learn to identify clauses in their own writing, they will have difficulty doing so if they cannot distinguish finite verbs from verbals. A clause has a subject / finite verb / complement pattern. Therefore, I opted to focus on the distinction in this book. It may prove to be too difficult—and need to be seriously revised. I’m always open to feedback.
Second, the third book has two primary objectives—subordinate clauses that function as direct objects, and the distinction between finite verbs and verbals. Between this mid-term and the final the only major addition is learning how the verbals that function as modifiers connect to the other constructions in sentences. This is the primary focus of Unit Nine. Theoretically, therefore students still have half a year to improve their ability to make the basic distinction.
Third, scoring these tests is sometimes subjective, mainly because of alternative explanations. I provided suggested scoring, but feel free to modify it.
Book 3 Mid-term Directions
Book 3, Sample Test: Based on “Garden Memories”
Book 3, Sample Test: Based on “Garden Memories” [AK]
Book 3, Mid-term # 1: Based on “Garden Memories”
Book 3, Mid-term # 1: Based on “Garden Memories” [AK]
Book 3, Mid-term # 2: Based on “The Frogs and the Ox”
Book 3, Mid-term # 2: Based on “The Frogs and the Ox” [AK]
Book 3, Mid-term # 3: Based on “The Bear and the Bees”
Book 3, Mid-term # 3: Based on “The Bear and the Bees” [AK]
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© Ed Vavra 12/16/2016
Book 3 Mid-term Directions
Analyze each sentence as you normally would:
1. Put parentheses ( ) around each prepositional phrase.
2. Underline subjects once, verbs twice, and label complements (“PN,” “PA,” “IO,” or “DO”).
3. Write “V” over every verbal, and label the complements of verbals as you would the complements of a finite verb.
4. Put brackets [ ] around each subordinate clause that functions as a direct object, and write “DO” above the opening bracket.
5. Put a vertical line after every main clause.
Then follow the Directions: For “Clause Pattern(s),”write the words in theS/V/C pattern(s) of the main and subordinate clause(s) in each sentence. Underline subjects once, verbs twice, and label the type of complements. Put brackets around the pattern of each subordinate clause and a vertical line after each main clause pattern.
For the listed words, explain how each connects to a word in the S/V/C pattern or to a verbal. If the word is a verbal, simply write “verbal.” See the examples below.
Examples:
1. The blossoms spread their yellow disks, and the yellow birds appeared, twittering and fluttering about them.
Clause Pattern(s): blossomsspreaddisks(DO)|birdsappeared|
twittering verbal
fluttering verbal
2. I think he liked yellow flowers.
Clause Pattern(s): Ithink[DOhelikedflowers(DO).]|
yellow adj. to “flowers”
them obj. of prep “about” The prep phrase is adverbial to “twittering” and “fluttering.”
3. Knowing what he had done, Sam was worried.
Clause Pattern(s): [DOwhat(DO)hehaddone]Samwasworried|
Knowing Verbal
he Subj in the clause “what . . . done” The clause is the DO of “Knowing.”
Name:______
Book 3, Sample Test: Based on “Garden Memories”
1 The man living there had a sister named Sally.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
living ______
there ______
named ______
Sally ______
2. Oliver's father would stop in front of the house, and Sally would come out to talk to them, and gather some flowers for the little boy.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
Oliver’s ______
front ______
house ______
talk ______
gather ______
some ______
boy ______
(continued on next page)
Name:______
Sample Test Based on “Garden Memories,” page 2.
3. Sally would pick a bunch of flowers and say, “Here is a posy for the little boy.”
Clause Pattern(s):
______
flowers ______
Here ______
little ______
4. He wondered if the yellow birds would return; and he planted a row of sunflowers like the row standing near the pear tree.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
sunflowers ______
row (second one)______
standing ______
pear ______
Book 3, Sample Test: Based on “Garden Memories” [AK]
Suggested scoring: two points for every correct word in the clause patterns, two for correct labels of complements, and two for every vertical line and for beginning and for ending brackets. Two each for correct explanations of listed words. This test totals 110 points.
1 The man living there had a sister named Sally.
Clause Pattern(s): manhadsister(DO) |[10 points]
living verbal
there Adv. to “living”
named verbal
Sally PN to “named”Technically, “Sally” is a retained predicate noun after the passive “named,” but the students haven’t studied that yet, so I would accept either “PN” or “DO” for this answer.
2. Oliver's father would stop in front of the house, and Sally would come out to talk to them, and gather some flowers for the little boy.
Clause Pattern(s): fatherwould stop|Sallywould come|[16 points]
Oliver’s adj. to “father”
front obj. of prep “in,” Prep phrase is adverbial to “would stop”
house obj. of prep “of,” prep phrase is adj. to “front”
talk part of the verbal “to talk”
gather verbal [One could argue that the “and” connects “gather” to “would come.” That view makes it a finite verb.]
some Adj. to “flowers,” which is the direct object of “gather”
boy obj. of the prep “for.” The prep phrase is adverbial to “gather,” alternatively it is the IO of “gather.”
Sample Mid-term Based on “Garden Memories” #1, page 3.
3. Sally would pick a bunch of flowers and say, “Here is a posy for the little boy.”
Clause Pattern(s): Sallywould pickbunch(DO)andsay[DOisposy]|[22 points
flowersobj. of prep “of,” phrase modifies “bunch”
Here adv. to “is”
little adj. to “boy,” “Boy” is the object of the prep. “for,” and the phrase is adverbial to “is.”[Or can it be considered an indirect object? Traditional grammars do not include indirect objects for what they call “linking verbs” like “is.” (For what it is worth, I would accept it.)]
4. He wondered if the yellow birds would return; and he planted a row of sunflowers like the row standing near the pear tree.
Clause Pattern(s): Hewondered[DObirdswould return]|heplantedrow(DO)|[26 points]
sunflowers obj. of prep. “of.” The phrase modifies “row”
row (second one) obj. of prep “like.” The phrase modifies the first “row”
standing verbal
pear adj. to “tree” which is the obj. of the prep “near.” The “near” phrase modifies “standing.”
Name:______
Book 3, Mid-term # 1: Based on “Garden Memories”
1. He said the squash bugs and caterpillars came back and were as friendly as ever.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
squash______
2. The yellow birds seemed very fond of the flowers, and Oliver loved to watch them flutter about.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
very ______
flutter ______
them ______
about ______
(continues on next page)
3. Oliver was quite small and he used to ride with his father and mother, sitting between them, and sometimes driving the horse.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
quite ______
mother ______
sitting ______
them ______
driving ______
horse ______
4. Oliver grew to be an old man, and he always remembered her kind, soft voice.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
be ______
man ______
always ______
kind ______
Book 3, Mid-term # 1: Based on “Garden Memories” [AK]
Suggested scoring: two points for every correct word in the clause patterns, two for correct labels of complements, and two for every vertical line and for beginning and for ending brackets. Two each for correct explanations of listed words. This test totals 109 points.
1. He said the squash bugs and caterpillars came back and were as friendly as ever.
Clause Pattern(s): Hesaid[DObugs and caterpillarscame and werefriendly(PA)] |[22 points]
squashadj. to “bugs”
2. The yellow birds seemed very fond of the flowers, and Oliver loved to watch them flutter about.
Clause Pattern(s): birdsseemedfond(PA)|Oliverlovedto watch[V (DO)]|[22 points]
very adv to “fond”
flutter verbal, the direct object of “to watch”
them subject of “flutter”
about adv. to “flutter”
3. Oliver was quite small and he used to ride with his father and mother, sitting between them, and sometimes driving the horse.
Clause Pattern(s): Oliverwassmall(PA)|heused to ride|[20 points]
quite adv. to “small”
mother one of the objects of the preposition “with” The prep phrase is adverbial to “used to ride.”
sitting verbal
them object of the preposition “between” The phrase modifies “sitting”
driving verbal
horse DO of “driving”
4. Oliver grew to be an old man, and he always remembered her kind, soft voice.
Clause Pattern(s): Olivergrew|herememberedvoice(DO)|[16 points]
Some students may consider “to be” as a direct object, but the meaning does not support that. The sense of the sentence is that he became an old man. Thus, the “to be” phrase is better explained as an adverb explaining how, not what.
be part of the verbal “to be”
man PN after “to be”
always adv. to remembered
kind adj. to “voice”
Name:______
Book 3,Mid-term # 2: Based on “The Frogs and the Ox”
1. An Ox came down to a reedy pool to drink.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
pool ______
reedy ______
drink ______
2. Splashing heavily into the water,he crushed a young Frog into the mud.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
Splashing ______
heavily______
water ______
young ______
mud ______
(continues on the next page)
3. Having missed the little one, the old Frogsoon asked his brothers and sisters what had become of him.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
Having ______
missed ______
one ______
4. “Big, was he!” said the old Frog, puffing herself up.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
puffing ______
herself ______
(continues on the next page)
5. But the little Frogs all declared that the monster was much, much bigger and the old Frog kept puffing herself out more and more.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
all ______
much (either one) ______
more (either one) ______
Book 3,Mid-term # 2: Based on “The Frogs and the Ox” [AK]
Suggested scoring: two points for every correct word in the clause patterns, two for correct labels of complements, and two for every vertical line and for beginning and for ending brackets. Two each for correct explanations of listed words. This test totals 120 points.
1. An Ox came down to a reedy pool to drink.
Clause Pattern(s): Oxcame|[6 points]
pool obj. of prep “to” The prep phrase is adverbial to “came.”
reedy adj. to “pool”
drink part of the verbal “to drink”
2. Splashing heavily into the water, he crushed a young Frog into the mud.
Clause Pattern(s): hecrushedFrog(DO)|[10 points]
Splashing Verbal
heavily adv. to “splashed”
water obj. of prep “into” The adverbial phrase modifies “splashing.”
young adj. to “Frog”
mud obj. of prep “into” The adverbial phrase modifies “crushed.”
3. Having missed the little one, the old Frogsoon asked his brothers and sisters what had become of him.
Clause Pattern(s): Frogaskedbrothers(IO) and sisters(IO)[DOwhathadbecome] |[24 points]
Having part of the verbal “Having missed”
missed part of the verbal “Having missed”
one DO of “Having missed”
4. “Big, was he!” said the old Frog, puffing herself up.
Clause Pattern(s): [DOBig(PA)washe]saidFrog|[18 points]
puffing verbal
herself DO of “puffing”
5. But the little Frogs all declared that the monster was much, much bigger and the old Frog kept puffing herself out more and more.
Clause Pattern(s): Frogsdeclared[DOmonsterwasbigger(PA)]|Frogkeptpuffingherself(DO)|[30 points]
all Adj. to “Frogs”
much (either one) Adv. to “bigger”
more (either one) Adv. to “kept puffing”
Name:______
Book 3, Mid-term # 3:Based on “The Bear and the Bees”
1. The Bear began to nose around the log very carefully to find out if the Bees were at home.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
log ______
very ______
find ______
home ______
2. Guessing what the Bear was after, the Bee flew at him, stinging him sharply, and then disappeared into the hollow log.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
Guessing ______
Bear ______
him (the first one) ______
him (the second one) ______
sharply ______
hollow ______
(continues on next page)
3. Losing his temper in an instant, the Bear sprang upon the log tooth and claw, to destroy the nest.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
Losing ______
temper ______
log ______
tooth ______
destroy ______
nest ______
4. The poor Bear had to take to his heels, and he was able to save himself only by diving into a pool of water.
Clause Pattern(s):
______
heels ______
save ______
himself______
diving ______
water ______
Book 3, Mid-term #3:Based on “The Bear and the Bees” [AK]
Suggested scoring: two points for every correct word in the clause patterns, two for correct labels of complements, and two for every vertical line and for beginning and for ending brackets. Two each for correct explanations of listed words. This test totals 102 points.
1. The Bear began to nose around the log very carefully to find out if the Bees were at home.
Clause Pattern(s): Bearbegantonose[DO(of “to find out”)Beeswere] | [18 points]
log obj of prep “around” phrase is adverbial to “to nose”
very adv. to “carefully,” which is an adverb to “to nose”
find part of the verbal “to find”
home obj. of prep “at,” the phrase is adverbial to “were.”
2. Guessing what the Bear was after, the Bee flew at him, stinging him sharply, and then disappeared into the hollow log.
Clause Pattern(s): [DO[of “Guessing”]Bearwas]Beeflew and disappeared| [16 points]
I would also accept “was after” as the finite verb phrase—“after” is idiomatic for “seeking,” “chasing,” etc. [This will, of course, change the scoring.]
Guessing Verbal
Bear Subj. in the “What . . . was” clause that is the DO of “Guessing”
him (the first one) obj. of prep “at,” the phrase is adverbial to “flew”
him (the second one) DO of the verbal “stinging”
sharply adv. to “stinging”
hollow adj. to “log,” which is the object of the preposition “into.” The prep phrase is adverbial to “disappeared.”
3. Losing his temper in an instant, the Bear sprang upon the log tooth and claw, to destroy the nest.
Clause Pattern(s): Bearsprang| [6 points]
Losing Verbal
temper DO of “Losing”
log Obj. of prep “upon,” the phrase is adverbial to “sprang”
tooth NuA to “sprang” [Meaningfully, it goes better with to “to destroy,” but the comma after “claw” cuts it off from that.]
destroy part of the verbal “to destroy”
nest DO of “to destroy”
4. The poor Bear had to take to his heels, and he was able to save himself only by diving into a pool of water.
Clause Pattern(s): Bearhadtotake|hewasable(PA)| [20 points]
heels obj. of the prep “to.” The phrase is adverbial to “had to take.”
save part of the verbal “to save”
himself DO of “to save”
diving Verbal [Object of the prep “by”; the phrase is adverbial to “to save”]
water obj. of the prep “of.” The phrase is adj to “pool,” which is the object of the prep “into.” That phrase is adv. to “diving”