ENG3C Writing

RHETORICAL DEVICES

·  Rhetorical devices are techniques that are used to create a certain effect on an audience;

·  Ways of arranging words and ideas to achieve maximum effect;

·  They can help achieve your purpose; that is, to emphasize, to shock, to add humour, to draw attention to word choice, to create suspense, and so on.

·  A rhetorical device can govern the arrangement of a sentence, a number or sentences in a row, or a much larger unit.

·  Rhetorical devices are used to make writing more colourful.

Anecdote: short amusing or interesting story (usually based on a real event)
- a brief, simple narration of a real-life incident.
- can be personal (not necessarily universally known)
Allusion: a brief, indirect reference to a person, place, object or event, assumed to be known to the reader.
- the writer does not explain the background information, but assumes the knowledge on the part of the reader.
- can be a reference to a person, event, place, literary piece, or work of art. It can be drawn from history, geography, literature, or religion / Example: “He was as strong as Hercules.”
Example: “The guy is a real Shakespeare” à is an allusion because it is indirect, presumes the reader knows who Shakespeare is, and implies an abstract thought, namely, that ‘the guy is a real poet.’
** Just referring to an author by name, e.g., “Thomas Aquinas wrote an average of forty pages a day for thirty years,” while it presumes we know who Aquinas was, is a direct reference; as such, it is not an allusion.
Satire: ridicule, irony, or sarcasm in speech or writing (or media)
- a novel, play, etc. that ridicules people’s hypocrisy or foolishness in this way / Example: e.g. The Simpsons
Bowling for Columbine
Irony: the use of words to convey a meaning that is the opposite of its literal meaning
- a technique of indicating, as through character or plot development, an intention or attitude opposite to that which is actually or ostensibly stated.
- An implied discrepancy between what is presented or said and what is meant.
- Verbal Irony à occurs when an speaker says one thing and means something else:
- Dramatic Irony à occurs when an audience perceives something that a character in the
literature does not know.
- Situational Irony à is a discrepancy between the expected result and actual results. / Example 1: “The irony of her reply, ‘How nice!’ when I said I had to work all weekend.”
Example 2: “The overuse of antibiotics has led to the rise of resistant strains of many diseases.”
Rhetorical Question: is one whose answer is already known or implied
- is a question that is intended to emphasize a point and persuade or engage
the reader rather than to provoke an answer (although the writer may even pose and answer the
question for effect) / Example: “Can anyone deny that the microchip has revolutionized communication?”
Bias: an opinion or influence that strongly favours one side in an argument or one item in a group or series / Example: “George Bush is only attacking Iraq because of his interest in the oil supply.”
Reference to Authority: making reference to someone who has extensive knowledge and credibility in a certain field/subject
- the quoting of a text or person who is an authority or “expert” on the topic.
- the authority is an expert by education or by experience.
-the quotation tends to make the writer's position more believable. / Example: Using a quotation from a Cardinal in the Catholic Church to strengthen an argument for a belief/practice in the Catholic Church
Example: “A successful sprinter or high jumper thinks only about his immediate race or jump; he does not think about what other competitors are doing,” said I.M. Swift, Physical Education professor and Olympic team psychologist.
Understatement: creates the reverse effect (and adds a touch of irony) by making the fact seem less significant / Example: “Bruce Willis’ onscreen characters frequently find themselves in a bit of a jam.”
Exaggeration (Hyperbole): an extravagant overstatement, not intended to be taken literally.
- used for emphasis / Example: “You could hear her irritating voice a mile away.”
Metaphor: a figure of speech in which a word or phrase that ordinarily designates one thing is used to designate another;
- a comparison which does not use “like” or “as” / Example: “His hands were ice.”
Simile: a comparison which uses “like” or “as” / Example: “His hands were as cold as ice.”
Personification: the attribution of human qualities to animals or things
- a form of metaphor that gives humanlike qualities or human form to objects and abstractions / Example: “Justice is a blindfolded woman holding a scale, Mother Country, Father Time.”
Juxtaposition: the placing of words, phrases, or sentences side by side (in classical Latin, juxta means “beside”)
- occurs when two images that are otherwise
not commonly brought together appear side by side or structurally close together, thereby forcing the reader to stop and reconsider the meaning of the text through the contrasting images, ideas, or motifs.
- the arrangement of two or more ideas, characters, actions, settings, phrases, or words side-by-side or in similar narrative moments for the purpose of comparison, contrast, rhetorical effect, suspense, or character development
- the positioning, like timing, is used to enhance
surprise or comparison or contrast.
- putting two contrasting ideas side by side
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- occurs when two or more images, ideas, settings, actions, phrases, words (etc.) that are otherwise not commonly brought together appear side by side or structurally close together, thereby forcing the reader to stop and reconsider the meaning of the text through the contrasting images, ideas, or motifs.
- for the purpose of comparison, contrast, rhetorical effect, suspense, or character development / Example #1: Michael Moore uses juxtaposition in Fahrenheit 911, when he plays the song "What a Wonder full World" while playing scenes of war and violence
Climax (Climatic Word Order): presents several facts in order from least to most important
- an arrangement of words, phrases, or clauses in order of their importance or emotional force (usually 3 or more) / Example: “The young politician’s career rise was meteoric; after beginning as a municipal councillor, she became mayor, and three short years later a Member of Parliament.”
Parallel Structure (Parallelism): refers to the use of the same form for words, phrases, or clauses that have equal value and function.
- the similarity of structure may convey equality of ideas, or emphasize contrast, or set up climactic order, or create aesthetic form and balance and rhythm, or pile up evidence, or create a memorable beginning or end to a work—or all of these. / Example #1: Abraham Lincoln’s “government of the people, by the people, for the people” (preposition, definite article, and noun are repeated in a series)
Example #2: “Let us consider the origin and development of medicine.”
Example #3: Her voice was low, soft, and pleasant.”
Repetition: repeating words, phrases (etc.) for emphasis, effect and rhythm / Example #1: “There is no mistake; there has been no mistake; and there shall be no mistake.”
Example #2: “It was a strange night, a hushed night, a moonless night, and all you could do was go to a movie.”
Sentence Fragment: places emphasis on key words to create an overall effect, such as humour or suspense / Example: “A cold room. A lonely room. A bare room. No place to spend twenty years of a life.”

TONE:

·  The author’s attitude, stated or implied, toward the subject matter and/or readers.

·  Tone may be pessimistic, optimistic, earnest, bitter, humourous, joyful, playful, formal, intimate, angry, ironic, outraged, baffled, tender, serene, depressed, etc.

·  An author’s tone can be revealed through choice of words (diction), stylistic devices and details.

·  The means of creating a relationship or conveying an attitude or mood.

·  By looking carefully at the choices an author makes (in characters, incidents, setting; in the work's stylistic choices and diction, etc.), careful readers often can isolate the tone of a work and sometimes infer from it the underlying attitudes that control and color the literary work as a whole.

Example: To illustrate the difference, two different novelists might write stories about capitalism.

·  Author #1 creates a tale in which an impoverished but hard-working young lad pulls himself out of the slums when he applies himself to his education, and he becomes a wealthy, contented middle-class citizen who leaves his past behind him, never looking back at that awful human cesspool from which he rose.

·  Author #2 creates a tale in which a dirty street-rat skulks his way out of the slums by abandoning his family and going off to college, and he greedily hoards his money in a gated community and ignores the suffering of his former "equals," whom he leaves behind in his selfish desire to get ahead.

·  Note that both author #1 and author #2 basically present the same plotline. While the first author's writing creates a tale of optimism and hope, the second author shapes the same tale into a story of bitterness and cynicism. The difference is in their respective tones--the way they convey their attitudes about particular characters and subject-matter.

Point of view:

1st Person / ·  “I”
2nd Person / ·  “you”
·  establishes a conversational tone, engaging reader
·  rarely used, and it’s very rarely on its own (example: it is sometimes used in introduction, then the author switches to 3rd person)
3rd Person / ·  “he”, “she”, “they”
·  NO “I”
·  used in formal essays