Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 3 marking ladder / pupil / teacherintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
ABC
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Connectives: when, then, next, however, because
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
ABC
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Connectives at the start of a sentence: when, then, next, however, because
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
ABC
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Verbs add detail: rushed, hurried, shot, wounded
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
ABC
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Connectives: when, then, next, however, because
Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 3 marking ladder / pupil / teacherintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
ABC
! ? or .
Connectives: when, then, next, however, because
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
ABC
! ? or .
Connectives at the start of a sentence: when, then, next, however, because
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
ABC
! ? or .
Verbs add detail: rushed, hurried, shot, wounded
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
ABC
! ? or .
Connectives: when, then, next, however, because
Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 4 marking ladder / pupil / teacherintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
Short sentence for effect: War was unexpected
Complex sentence: Although Sarajevo seemed far away, the shooting of the Ferdinand sparked a fierce debate in Britain
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
Complex sentence: Being afraid of Germany's growing power, England decided to join forces with France.
Connectives expand your ideas: therefore, then, next, however, because, as a result
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench, alliance, treaty, debate
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
Drop in clause: Pricip, one of six assassins, was arrested shortly after the event.
Connectives expand your ideas: nevertheless, on the other hand, despite the fact
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance, Wilhelm
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
Refer back to the beginning
Connective back up your ideas: therefore, as a result, in conclusion
Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 4 marking ladder / pupil / teacherintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
Short sentence for effect: War was unexpected
Complex sentence: Although Sarajevo seemed far away, the shooting of the Ferdinand sparked a fierce debate in Britain
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
Complex sentence: Being afraid of Germany's growing power, England decided to join forces with France.
Connectives expand your ideas: therefore, then, next, however, because, as a result
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench, alliance, treaty, debate
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
Drop in clause: Pricip, one of six assassins, was arrested shortly after the event.
Connectives expand your ideas: nevertheless, on the other hand, despite the fact
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance, Wilhelm
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
Refer back to the beginning
Connective back up your ideas: therefore, as a result, in conclusion
Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 5 marking ladder / p / tintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
Short sentence for effect: War was unexpected
Complex sentence: Although Sarajevo seemed far away, the shooting of the Ferdinand sparked a fierce debate in Britain
Use an adverbial phrase at the start of the sentence: Unexpectedly, Hurriedly, Unfortunately
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
Complex sentence: Being afraid of Germany's growing power, England decided to join forces with France.
Connectives link paragraphs together: firstly, at the start, therefore, then, next, however, because, as a result
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench, alliance, treaty, debate
Use a range of punctuation: ; ! ? .... -
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
Drop in clause: Pricip, one of six assassins, was arrested shortly after the event.
Connectives link paragraphs together: secondly, nevertheless, on the other hand, despite the fact
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance, Wilhelm, propaganda, assassination, kangaroo court
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
Refer back to the beginning
Connectives link paragraphs together: in conclusion, to sum up,
Use an adverbial phrase at the start of the sentence: Unexpectedly, Hurriedly, Unfortunately
Holiday marking ladder - information/non-chronological report
Level 5 marking ladder / p / tintroduction (sum up what you are writing about)
Short sentence for effect: War was unexpected
Complex sentence: Although Sarajevo seemed far away, the shooting of the Ferdinand sparked a fierce debate in Britain
Use an adverbial phrase at the start of the sentence: Unexpectedly, Hurriedly, Unfortunately
1st paragraph (one area that you are interested in)
Complex sentence: Being afraid of Germany's growing power, England decided to join forces with France.
Connectives link paragraphs together: firstly, at the start, therefore, then, next, however, because, as a result
Technical terms: infantry, soldiers, front, trench, alliance, treaty, debate
Use a range of punctuation: ; ! ? .... -
2nd paragraph (another area that you are interested in)
Drop in clause: Pricip, one of six assassins, was arrested shortly after the event.
Connectives link paragraphs together: secondly, nevertheless, on the other hand, despite the fact
Technical terms: Germany, Empire, treaty, alliance, Wilhelm, propaganda, assassination, kangaroo court
Conclusion (sum up what you have found out)
Refer back to the beginning
Connectives link paragraphs together: in conclusion, to sum up,
Use an adverbial phrase at the start of the sentence: Unexpectedly, Hurriedly, Unfortunately