SONNET Peer Editing 4/2/14 (Submit this with your final poem due Thurs, 4/3/14)
Poet # ______Peer Edited by: ______
(You can write your name after you receive feedback)
FORM: To what extent does the draft poem……contain 14 lines + have a creative title? 1 2 3 4 5pts
… contain 10 beats per line (pentameter)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show an attempt to follow a rhyme scheme? 1 2 3 4 5pts
. . .display a clear volta (turn)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…use creative diction (word choice) + syntax (word order)
while avoid grammatical errors? 1 2 3 4 5pts
CONTENT: TWE does the draft poem……present a BEFORE or a PROBLEM 1 2 3 4 5pts
…provide an AFTER or SOLVE the problem? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…make sense + flow? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show vs. tell in an effective balance? (e.g. fig. lang) 1 2 3 4 5pts
…engage the reader? (i.e. Do you get “the feels”?) 1 2 3 4 5pts
I liked/I noticed/Maybe you could ______
______
SONNET Peer Editing 4/2/14 (Submit this with your final poem due Thurs, 4/3/14)
Poet # ______Peer Edited by: ______
(You can write your name after you receive feedback)
FORM: To what extent does the draft poem……contain 14 lines + have a creative title? 1 2 3 4 5pts
… contain 10 beats per line (pentameter)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show an attempt to follow a rhyme scheme? 1 2 3 4 5pts
. . .display a clear volta (turn)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…use creative diction (word choice) + syntax (word order)
while avoid grammatical errors? 1 2 3 4 5pts
CONTENT: TWE does the draft poem……present a BEFORE or a PROBLEM 1 2 3 4 5pts
…provide an AFTER or SOLVE the problem? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…make sense + flow? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show vs. tell in an effective balance? (e.g. fig. lang) 1 2 3 4 5pts
…engage the reader? (i.e. Do you get “the feels”?) 1 2 3 4 5pts
I liked/I noticed/Maybe you could ______
______
SONNET Peer Editing 4/2/14 (Submit this with your final poem due Thurs, 4/3/14)
Poet # ______Peer Edited by: ______
(You can write your name after you receive feedback)
FORM: To what extent does the draft poem……contain 14 lines + have a creative title? 1 2 3 4 5pts
… contain 10 beats per line (pentameter)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show an attempt to follow a rhyme scheme? 1 2 3 4 5pts
. . .display a clear volta (turn)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…use creative diction (word choice) + syntax (word order)
while avoid grammatical errors? 1 2 3 4 5pts
CONTENT: TWE does the draft poem……present a BEFORE or a PROBLEM 1 2 3 4 5pts
…provide an AFTER or SOLVE the problem? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…make sense + flow? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show vs. tell in an effective balance? (e.g. fig. lang) 1 2 3 4 5pts
…engage the reader? (i.e. Do you get “the feels”?) 1 2 3 4 5pts
I liked/I noticed/Maybe you could ______
______
SONNET Peer Editing 4/2/14 (Submit this with your final poem due Thurs, 4/3/14)
Poet # ______Peer Edited by: ______
(You can write your name after you receive feedback)
FORM: To what extent does the draft poem……contain 14 lines + have a creative title? 1 2 3 4 5pts
… contain 10 beats per line (pentameter)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show an attempt to follow a rhyme scheme? 1 2 3 4 5pts
. . .display a clear volta (turn)? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…use creative diction (word choice) + syntax (word order)
while avoid grammatical errors? 1 2 3 4 5pts
CONTENT: TWE does the draft poem……present a BEFORE or a PROBLEM 1 2 3 4 5pts
…provide an AFTER or SOLVE the problem? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…make sense + flow? 1 2 3 4 5pts
…show vs. tell in an effective balance? (e.g. fig. lang) 1 2 3 4 5pts
…engage the reader? (i.e. Do you get “the feels”?) 1 2 3 4 5pts
I liked/I noticed/Maybe you could ______
______