*For the Links – (Creating your supported sentences, after you’ve your Topic Sentence and found of your Evidence).
Tell the reader what the evidence means (explain the evidence).
Also explain why the evidence matters (SO WHAT? How does the evidence prove the point of that claim – that reason?)
Ms. G’s example:
2nd Paragraph
Topic Sentence:The first significant reason that smoking should be bannedis because of the diseases it causes when consumed.
Evidence #1: (Introduce the evidence!)
[-The CDC website also states that, “Lung diseases caused by smoking includes COPD, which includes emphysema and chronic bronchitis.”]
[-“8.6 million people live with a serious illness caused by smoking.” (betobaccofree.gov)]
Link #1: (Explain what the evidence means AND why it matters)
Ms. Garaway’s example --
***WHOLE PARAGRAPH will read as:
The first significant reason that smoking should be bannedis because of the diseases it causes when consumed. The CDC website states that, “Smoking causes stroke and coronary heart disease, which are among the leading causes of death in the United States.”This proves that smoking is dangerous because it causes heart related illnesses. This is a disease that attacks a key organ in your body, which is vital for you to keep living. This illness, directly connected to cigarette smoking, is so dangerous that it is one of the main reasons people die in the United States. In addition, not only does smoking cause heart disease, but it causes other life-threatening diseases as well. The CDC website states that, “Lung diseases caused by smoking include COPD, which includes emphysema and chronic bronchitis.”This quote showsthat tobacco has the power to generate disease that affects the lung, which makes it very difficult to live, when your breathing is disturbed. What matters is that people should stop smoking, especially with the knowledge of these surrounding health issues. “8.6 million people live with a serious illness caused by smoking,” as shared on the site . This also means that consumed tobacco has the ability to affect millions of humans. Therefore, these health problems are frightening and scary and preventable by seizing to smoke.
*STARTING TO DRAFT PERSUASIVE ESSAY:
Set up page –
Name: PS #:
Persuasive Essay Draft
TOPIC: ______
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*Don’t forget to skip spaces and number your pages, front and back!
*Take what you filled out on your Outline and copy it into complete sentences & paragraphs, onto lined paper.
*Each section on the paper is another paragraph so you MUST INDENT (move in a few spaces).
Writing in order
*Start with your Hook and Thesis Statement,
writtenTOGETHER as your First Paragraph.
*REMEMBER:
-Indent each paragraph (move in a couple spaces)
-Write everything as complete sentences.
*Don’t forget to include where you got your information from = Cite Evidence!
Ex. The Betobaccofree website states that…
or
After you write something ().
~Also, you may change things or add in lines that aren’t on your Outline WHILE you are writing.