OPTION 2: WRITER/WRITER’S SOMEONE AS CELEBRITY
READER #1:1. Is the writing clear and comprehensible? Do you understand the meaning of the sentence? / Y / N
2. Is it clear that the essay will be about either the author or someone the author knows well? (and is it clear which of the two this will be?) / Y / N
3. Does the writer name the context/situation in which this person was a celebrity? / Y / N
4. Does the author make the claim that the person was a celebrity? / Y / N
5. Does the writer make any other claim about the experience? / Y / N
6. Is the sentence grammatical? / Y / N
7. Is the sentence punctuated correctly? / Y / N
8. Which type of sentence is it: S, CPD or CPX?
9. If the writer put any vague words in parentheses, do you have suggestions for replacement words to make the sentence more specific? Write them here:
10. What is most intriguing to you about this thesis statement?
READER #2:
1. Is the writing clear and comprehensible? Do you understand the meaning of the sentence? / Y / N
2. Is it clear that the essay will be about either the author or someone the author knows well? (and is it clear which of the two this will be?) / Y / N
3. Does the writer name the context/situation in which this person was a celebrity? / Y / N
4. Does the author make the claim that the person was a celebrity? / Y / N
5. Does the writer make any other claim about the experience? / Y / N
6. Is the sentence grammatical? / Y / N
7. Is the sentence punctuated correctly? / Y / N
8. Which type of sentence is it: S, CPD or CPX?
9. If the writer put any vague words in parentheses, do you have suggestions for replacement words to make the sentence more specific? Write them here:
10. What is most intriguing to you about this thesis statement?
READER #3:
1. Is the writing clear and comprehensible? Do you understand the meaning of the sentence? / Y / N
2. Is it clear that the essay will be about either the author or someone the author knows well? / Y / N
3. Does the writer name the context/situation in which this person was a celebrity? / Y / N
4. Does the author make the claim that the person was a celebrity? / Y / N
5. Does the writer make any other claim about the experience? / Y / N
6. Is the sentence grammatical? / Y / N
7. Is the sentence punctuated correctly? / Y / N
8. Which type of sentence is it: S, CPD or CPX?
9. If the writer put any vague words in parentheses, do you have suggestions for replacement words to make the sentence more specific? Write them here:
10. What is most intriguing to you about this thesis statement?
READER #4:
1. Is the writing clear and comprehensible? Do you understand the meaning of the sentence? / Y / N
2. Is it clear that the essay will be about either the author or someone the author knows well?(and is it clear which of the two this will be?) / Y / N
3. Does the writer name the context/situation in which this person was a celebrity? / Y / N
4. Does the author make the claim that the person was a celebrity? / Y / N
5. Does the writer make any other claim about the experience? / Y / N
6. Is the sentence grammatical? / Y / N
7. Is the sentence punctuated correctly? / Y / N
8. Which type of sentence is it: S, CPD or CPX?
9. If the writer put any vague words in parentheses, do you have suggestions for replacement words to make the sentence more specific? Write them here:
10. What is most intriguing to you about this thesis statement?