Jan 2016doc.: IEEE 802.11-16/0115r0

IEEE P802.11
Wireless LANs

11ah SB0 Comment Resolution
Date: 2016-01-18
Author(s):
Name / Affiliation / Address / Phone / email
Liwen Chu / Marvell

Abstract

This submission proposescomment resolutions for the following comments:

8205, 8321, 8323, 8450.

Interpretation of a Motion to Adopt

A motion to approve this submission means that the editing instructions and any changed or added material are actioned in the TGah Draft. This introduction is not part of the adopted material.

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CID / Clause Num / P / L / Comment / Propose Change / Resolution
8205 / 9.2.4.2 / 91.00 / 36 / Remove the word "or Sensor Traffic". Sensor Traffic is not defined anywhere else in the document. / Remove "or Sensor Traffic" from the table 9-1. A clause that explains the single AC nature of sensor STAs is already in 9.22.2.1. / Accepted
8321 / 9.2.1 / 76.00 / 6 / It is unclear from the figure which part is "Used for beamforming with the AP/PCP" / add a line between the call out "Used for beamforming with the AP/PCP" and the box A-BFT Access / Acceptd
8323 / 9.2.4.2 / 89.00 / 34 / There is no need to specify "Sensor Traffic" as a designation. As long as sensor traffic is mapped to AC_BE, or UP 0, there is no need to specify this in this table / remove "or Sensor Traffic" from Designation for UP 0 / Accepted
8450 / 9.31.1 / 186.00 / 47 / This paragraph seems to be out of the place in the general discussion section since no discussion in the original text in RevMC 4.0 was on any specific generations of STAs. It should be moved to 9.31.3. / Move this paragraph to 9.31.3 / Rejected
The changes in 9.31.1 were originally in 9.31.3. Based on comment, the changes were then moved to 9.31.1. The reason is that the changes applying to the whole subclause 9.31.3 can’t be in the same subclause.

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